Poet, Adam Laceky (Society member 48,371), sent us this 10-part poem about clouds. We thoroughly enjoyed each section dedicated to a particular cloud.
1. Cumulonimbus
It looks like a fist of cauliflower
on the dish of a toddler
who is irked
that he has been served
cauliflower
for the third time this week.
He is perturbed.
Flashes of yellow and purple
inside the cauliflower
correspond to his ire.
Cumulonimbus clouds form
when the situation is about to get real.
2. Funnel Cloud
The klaxons panicked, so we descended
to the cellar,
where we debated the pros and cons
of various tornado shelters.
We bonded.
And when the poem had passed,
we ascended.
It looked like a bomb had gone off.
It looked like a war zone.
The original poem was gone.
Twistered metaphors were everywhere.
The only words to remain intact
were the title, and the word “yokels.”
This poem was erected
on the foundation of that wreckage
as a tribute to human fortitude
and, perhaps, foolishness.
3. Nimbostratus
Before she enters the conversation
she peeks from behind the edge
of the opening door of her face.
She keeps one toe in the hallway,
one finger on the doorknob
of her opinion, just in case.
If you knew anything about her
and about nimbostratus
you would see that they’re roughly the same.
4. Kelvin-Helmholtz Formations
Pretend for a moment you’re real:
not a character in this poem, but its reader,
and for the first time, everything is clear.
Each moment precedes logically the next;
your assumptions are all correct.
You can produce documents, if necessary.
But how do you explain this implausible sky?
Look at it. It is preposterous. It does not follow.
And you remember you’re part of the poem again.
5. Large and Small Magellanic Clouds
They don’t even belong in this poem,
but if you must know:
they are dwarf galaxies, our nearest neighbors
(notwithstanding Canis Major).
They orbit the Milky Way
at fifty-five kiloparsecs, on average,
from the galactic center at Sagittarius A,
where they are distracting us
from more immediate matters.
6. Lenticular
Lenticular clouds come in peace.
They are citizens of the sky.
You can look at them as much as you please;
they’re not shy.
Lenticular clouds want to serve mankind.
You can look them up on Wikipedia.
Like them on Facebook, if you don’t mind.
Take them to your leader.
Lenticular clouds tend to appear
at the intermediate nexus of the troposphere
and the endogalactic reticulum.
[citation needed]
7. Contrails
A jet airliner, flying in a straight line, traces
from horizon to horizon, an arc
that defines
almost perfectly the curvature
of the Earth.
It partitions the sky to its vanishing
according to schedules and trajectories
that were determined
months beforehand,
for reasons beyond misunderstanding.
The sky looks like a parking lot
where no one is allowed to park.
8. Mammatus
Another thing named after breasts.
Add it to mastodon, mammoth, and mammal,
and the ever-popular preverbal mama.
If women had managed nebular nomenclature
maybe these clouds would be named after testicles.
9. Horseshoe Vortex
It goes galloping across the sky,
spinning like an errant lariat,
spilling luck along its trail
because it was improperly nailed
to the atmosphere.
10. The Last Cloud
You watch it dissipate
like a wisp of vapor
commending its spirit
into the hands of the heavens,
because that’s what it was.
Before it disappeared
it looked like a bunny.
It looked like a tribe of Maori.
It looked like everything
that every cloud
has ever resembled,
and everything
that clouds never got around
to looking like.
It looked like my grandmother
before she died
and after.
It looks like an empty sky.
© Adam Laceky
Here are a couple of supplementary poems I wrote after I wrote the ten main poems. They don’t really fit the format, but I still like them. The third poem is a collaborative effort. It didn’t even begin as a poem–it was a bunch of goofs on a message board making silly observations.
Disclaimer
None of these poems should be mistaken for clouds.
However well written, there are telltale differences.
For instance,
most clouds cannot be pronounced.
In addition,
poems don’t rain,
but clouds often rhyme.
In general:
every cloud is a poem,
The confusion arises when
one tries to distinguish
between
what a cloud is
and what it is not
because
those are usually the same thing.
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Untitled
If you say the word cloud
silently or out loud
often enough, it doesn’t sound
like a word anymore:
just like a cloud.
If you look at a cloud
humbly earth-bound
and long enough
you can hear the words
that it sounds like.
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Clouds are just fog that can fly.
Rain is a puddle
that remembered gravity.
The sky
is grey.
Wind is just air
that has to be somewhere.
Hurricanes occur
when mattress tags are disturbed
(though correlation is not causation).
Ice is just water
that for
whatever reason
got bored.
Fog is just lazy clouds.
Layabouts.
You’d think they’d aspire to more.
I will second that– what a fun poem to read–and to think about. Thank you.
What a fun poem to read! Oh, whoops, I forgot I’m part of it….